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Discussion in 'Hangout' started by linealover, Nov 14, 2010.

  1. linealover

    linealover Regolare

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    since my career is onboard ship.............so i dont know what to do in free time.....so this is the attempt

    it was a splended experience moving in the deep ocean.........i use to watch the mother ocean everday after finished with works.......anyone who alone, watching the

    sea at night could think he must have enough dare to see the vastness.........perhaps VLCC(very large crude carrier) consider as the most ever biggest man made

    moving object in the earth measuring 320 metre in length and 60 metre in bredth.......total weight over than 3 lakh tonne.............eventhough
    .............for apt comparison its like a small leaf floating in the will come for help.........a few hundred miles away from any nearest shore.its mere "surivival to the

    fittest".......we should competent able to come over from many hazards...like fire...u cannot call 101...........if ur car broke out,u can call mechanic service...hee..hee.....










    In simple there are many villians waiting for ur recklessness..........to swallow......there always exists a constant battling against all hurdles


    .........for instance



    ..............if main engine malfunction for few minutes........we are
    going to have function for which
    we can't makes our presence ........ its our funeral function.........
    good thing about this job
    ......expect to do our job alone...........no need to thing about the
    jeoulesy,pride,.........for instance most of the shore job, most
    people do something to maintain the job security.....here nothing of
    that kind (in nallathamayanthi...."pudicaha vella sei illa adutha bus
    pudichi vettuku vanthudu".......enga australia vula
    irruntha?...hee....hee)...........
    there is no competition at all....i scarcity is there .......no mind
    work......like "all in all
    mechanic"....."alaguraja"..... ..getting salary twice or thrice that
    of any competent job in shore.......getting leave as we wish......can
    move with our family at the company cost (mottai attichudalam) to the
    countries............
    Above all it gives satisfaction that still in mech
    field..............as "majestic mech"









    okay bore adikutha...oru chinna kavithai parpomma???????



    WATER WATER EVERYWHERE--PERHAPS
    NOT EVEN A DROP TO QUENCH THE SWEAR

    DEEPER DEEPER EVERYWHERE--PERHAPS
    NOT SEEMS TO BOUND WITH EGO CARE

    VASTNESS VASTNESS EVERYWHERE--PERHAPS
    WONDERFUL GLANCE VERY RARE

    ROUGHNESS ROUGHNESS EVERYWHERE--PERHAPS
    WIILING TO TAKE LOTS OF LIVING PAIR

    PLAYFUL PLAYFUL EVERYWHERE--PERHAPS
    SUN AND MOON HIDE & SEEK HERE AND THERE

    WRINKLING WRINKLING EVERWHERE --PERHAPS
    TUMBLES US COULD NOT BARE


    above lines resembles the way i see the sea............perhaps
    first line indicates the varies nature(behaviour) of the
    ocean......and second line indicates the different qualties of the
    ocean...

    EVERTHING WAS STANDSTILL ....EVERTHING WAS STANDSTILL
    ALL ABOUT THE POND WITHOUT A PILL
    LAYERS OF STANDSTILL....... LAYERS OF STANDSTILL
    BEYOND THE SCOPE OF TIME AND WILL
    PERVADES WITH SILENCE....PERVADES WITH SILENCE
    SINCE AFTER THE GREAT VIOLENCE
    REVERBERTION OF LONELYNESS....REVERBERTION OF LONELYNESS
    PERVADES EVERWHERE WITH DIVENESS
    FRAGRANCE OF LOVENESS...FRAGRANCE OF LOVENESS
    SHOWERS THE TRANSCENDS EVERWHERE

    i wish all should experience the deep sea..............must libert
    from the limitations and boundaries.........i saw many small
    islands........home for many birds and plants......filed with lush
    green......all fruits fallen naturally after ripen.........we passed
    many islands with rain forest....thank god .....no mankind in these
    islands......so absoultely no pollution.....

    thanx for your patience

    regards linealover....sorry shiplover
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  2. Bala

    Bala Esperto

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    Linealover,where are the pics of the beautiful ocean and the ship???
    What is that career by the way,you had not mentioned in the thread meant for that!
    Is it that risky to reveal one's name???
    Nice write up i should say,why don't let us know the places you have visited in your job?,a travelogue would be interesting.
    That sentence about funeral function was very scary,don't even say that.
    Kavidhai...kalakkal!
  3. linealover

    linealover Regolare

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    thanks bala.........i am working as a 4th engineer on oil tanker.............. will upload pictures....just now learned how to upload .....
  4. sungoa2010

    sungoa2010

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    Wine is better when it is old. So we are waiting for better and sweeter wine. Not the tuscan wine but the pictures:D
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  5. linealover

    linealover Regolare

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    Ras tanurah, ras al khima--makes her
    laden like a heavy meal hyna
    officers have had sign off-sign on--perhaps this
    mistress have no such wind off.

    Everynight i kiss her, before i go bed-mighty
    giant never miss her kid
    i felt,i was living in a bird's feather-irrespective of
    she manouver even in bad weather.

    People battle for piece of paper on a boundaryof map-as a
    pupil cradled away beyond the boundries in her lap
    once i felt very happy to go ashore--returned sad
    since i left her as a castaway core.

    Yellowish-red sunset at the evening time dark--along with
    fellowish sailor on the deck for a plesant walk
    waving my hands to the duty officer on the deck--as a sign of
    saving my life from the sea sick.

    I worked,learned,played with her all time
    she protects me, cared me at her lap everytime--i saw
    her as a friend,as a mother,as a sister,and as lover--at best time
    how can i show my gratitude at this time--might
    be i dedicate this only rhyme.
  6. sungoa2010

    sungoa2010

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    I haven't travelled in a ship but Once I got a chance to get in to a dredger with the help of some officers at cochin port. I sat on the top with the . My god when it reached far away from shore to drop what she had collected near the shore, the experience was awesome. I might have experienced the same when I was born in the home made cradle, which I don't remember now. The wavy motion that one experience is unparallelled. There is no doubt why linealover became a poet.:D
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  7. Ganges

    Ganges Esperto

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    Ras tanurah
    Nice Corniche place ;) loved it .. Not the ship though.

    located some 90 Kms odd from Al-Khobar.KSA.
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  8. vijays777

    vijays777 Regolare

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    Linea T-Jet
    super kavidhaigal , keep rocking ship lover.
    Think you are the one who can see the sunrise and sunset touching the sea :)
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  9. jovi2403

    jovi2403 Amatore

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    Bangalore
    Punto Evo 1.3 90 HP
    Good Poetry, linealover. Even my bro works as 4E. He gifted me the PUNTO and so I am a TFIan. Enjoy ur work and ride.
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